Breaking Star

Breaking Star

A Poem by Project022

Warm; there’s something warm

Falling down my face

Multiple things

Jumping from my chin

Landing on my pale legs

As I stare into the small light

Wishing and praying for

What I just saw wasn’t true

The man of my dreams;

With someone new

Smiling that smile I love;

I walked to my bed

Stared at the ceiling and eventually;

Fell into a deep sleep


“Mommy! Mommy!”

I walked over

“Yes?”

“Why is that huge star less bright?”

I glanced up and noticed the darker star

I turned back to my son

“The star is heartbroken”

I stare back up at the star

“The star was once a person;

Each night one of their memories plays”

I felt a tiny hand touching my hand

I turned to my son and witnessed him crying

“Sweetie.. Why are you crying?”

He glanced at me

“It isn’t fair.. They’re dead for a reason;

They lived their life.. Why can’t they be free?

Why do they have to suffer anymore?”


“She is a goner”

The angels all turned towards the huge star

“It’s horrible isn’t it? She had so much to live for.”

They all started nodding slowly

“Some people just get born at the wrong times;

She was one of those people”

All the angels turned around to stare at God

“She’s breaking like a broken heart;

Soon she’ll fade from the sky.

Just like she faded from the world.

Once the memories reaches the person’s death

The star will fade away.”

© 2017 Project022


Author's Note

Project022
I hope you like this poem ^^

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A starry soulful poem, your poetic star shan't dim if u write so awesomely and that ought to brighten your skies dear poet. Sensational beginning n hopefully things will be better. Kudos.

I'm a newbie here, pls review, comment my first poem here, wud luv to know your thoughts, I'm navigating the site looking for poem pals.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You refer star as a person with broken heart ,ohh !! It's realy nice . I enjoyed reading it . Keep writing (((smiles))) 😊😊😊😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Project022

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much ^^ I'll be sure to continue writing (:
Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Your most welcome !! 😄😄😄
who knows,maybe stars are really people with broken hearts and dreams

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Project022

5 Years Ago

Yes maybe they are, but we would never really know
 wordman

5 Years Ago

you`re welcome,,maybe people with broken hearts just look at the stars and cry out
Project022

5 Years Ago

yeah that's what I do, it helps a lot
A starry soulful poem, your poetic star shan't dim if u write so awesomely and that ought to brighten your skies dear poet. Sensational beginning n hopefully things will be better. Kudos.

I'm a newbie here, pls review, comment my first poem here, wud luv to know your thoughts, I'm navigating the site looking for poem pals.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love reading poem about stars. I loved this, it was a tale beautifully narrated. It reminded me of Fault in our stars. I like your thoughts.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Project022

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much..! I am glad you liked it ^^
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
You seem to have what I call 'a sense of words'-- their beauty, their power; as you appear to be young, I hope you realize you have a lifetime to craft and polish such skill-- a lifetime whose parameters are determined by a power far greater than ourselves, lest one put one's soul at risk.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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