Her Eyes

Her Eyes

A Poem by Ellay

            Her eyes were diamonds
They twinkled in the sunlight
        She lit up my life

© 2015 Ellay


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register



Reviews

You're good at making people smile :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Truly beautiful! Loved reading this!

Posted 8 Years Ago
Another well-written and heartfelt senryu... the eyes always get me too... a fine tribute to one who brought you much light!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
I remember writing these in school. This is a great one. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank You :D
~ A summary worth writing about. Someone special in our lives can change our entire outlook. Well done. ~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you Relic :)
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
~
A lovely senryu. A beautiful tribute of something that was the source of light in your life. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you. that was just the message i was going for :D

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe
Flag Flag Writing


Stats

319 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
 Added on July 8, 2015
Last Updated on July 8, 2015

Author

Ellay
Ellay

NY



About
I'm a young human interested in writing, not as a career, but as a hobby This is a little bit about me I'm now a senior in high school, after having started this account when I was a sophomore. Sc.. more..

Writing
Prologue Prologue

A Chapter by Ellay
[more writing]