Smile

Smile

A Poem by Ellay

     Her smile has moved me
It made my heart skip a beat
  My motivation

© 2015 Ellay


Author's Note

Ellay
Let me know if I should try different genres of poetry

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The answer is, "Yes, we all should spread our poetical wings and try every form of poetry."
How else to become truly skilled in every aspect, and to find our niche in the art we so deeply love and are passionately embraced by.

This is a most appealing and romantic Senryu, Pepitro … so very moving to the heart's affection.
To fulfill the rules for this form, add another syllable to the first line to make it a true 5/7/5 syllable Senryu.

Thank you, My Friend, for sharing you excellent craft with us! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I will definitely fix the first line, and thank you for pointing it out to me! :)



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Short and happy! Another lovely piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
You should definitely try different genres of poetry. Yor simplistic style and the elegance of the words send a strong message.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Elodie Thompson

8 Years Ago

No worries.
Made me smile. A short, sweet poem. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :D
Smiles also cheer me up! Loved this senryu!

Posted 8 Years Ago


a smile is, indeed, a great motivator...a nicely-written senryu...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Lovely. :) i like the picture too. Its cute. :) and yes! keep writing, and try different forms of poetry too :) we all need to, only that way you can find the form that suits you the best.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
The answer is, "Yes, we all should spread our poetical wings and try every form of poetry."
How else to become truly skilled in every aspect, and to find our niche in the art we so deeply love and are passionately embraced by.

This is a most appealing and romantic Senryu, Pepitro … so very moving to the heart's affection.
To fulfill the rules for this form, add another syllable to the first line to make it a true 5/7/5 syllable Senryu.

Thank you, My Friend, for sharing you excellent craft with us! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I will definitely fix the first line, and thank you for pointing it out to me! :)
Greta poem, loved it! :) Thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Very sweet. You're good at these... :)
Always great to try something different though.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ellay

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on July 12, 2015
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