I think that this was a good choice for a first/last Haiku, as I tend to find Haikus to be annoying and a bit trivial all around. This however is very much not that, as it seems more to me like a three part comic strip that is neither a comic nor stripped. I know what it is to 'quit' a vice to find that in the quitting there seems to be a great lack for the rest of life. Nicely done.
as a smoker i love it! Very good hakiu! I wish i could taste things its startin to fade... and my emphezima is startin to kick in....... i loved the short and simple line though. NO b/s and i liked that!!!
Funny how if we stop our 'habits' the world becomes so different. I like the idea of this haiku, there's a lot more going on that meets the eye which is how one should work.
I think that this was a good choice for a first/last Haiku, as I tend to find Haikus to be annoying and a bit trivial all around. This however is very much not that, as it seems more to me like a three part comic strip that is neither a comic nor stripped. I know what it is to 'quit' a vice to find that in the quitting there seems to be a great lack for the rest of life. Nicely done.
All I wanna listen to is The Blood Brothers, since March 23 2009
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