Godly Creation

Godly Creation

A Poem by Li Li

The first time he approached

He placed his hand on my back

He looked at me

I found myself looking into eyes

Instantly giving me inspiration

 

Being poetic...

I could only find one explanation

I saw more soul in his spirit

Than I saw stars in the constellations

Revelations of sincerity

Promises of prosperity

Within the grey twilight of his eyes

I heard my horoscopic parody

 

In basic terminology....

He became my astrology

I found myself in a predicament

Him and I

Two puppets of a heavenly experiment

 

I'm beyond the clouds

The sky

The sun

Existing in a universe

Where two actually become one

 

Scientifically speaking....

A new big bang theory has begun

For everything around me

Became extinct

And all I could think

Was if he were the Milky Way

I'd definitely take a drink

 

Solar energy

Gravitational pull

The moon must have been full

Because my tide is rising

Cosmic showers are devising

 

The wind is blowing

My soul is glowing

Passionate streams begin flowing

As divination began bestowing

A phenominal providence

As intense as an eclipse

Caught in the glimpse of his universe

 

Such a Godly creation....


© 2008 Li Li



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Oh yea!!! This is talent girl where do I begin, the lines i just love
In basic terminology....
He became my astrology

Existing in a universe
Where two actually become one

Was if he were the Milky Way
I'd definitely take a drink



And my ultimate favorite;

The moon must have been full
Because my tide is rising

I mean that takes me there, innocent words that glow with passion

Fantastic write, great display of talent.




Posted 9 Years Ago



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Li Li
Li Li

The Land of Misfit Toys, IL



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My real name is Alicia. I live on the east side of St. Louis. I've grown to have a passion for spoken word. I started writing poetry at a very young age but never thought it was something to.. more..

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