Plastic Walls....

Plastic Walls

When I try to see

It blurs my eyes,

When i try to hear

it muffles the sound,

When i try to speak,

it echoes around me

but no escaped sounds.

These Plastic Walls close in,

the world around me

continues to spin.

But i dont see the exit sign

or did i not get my invite?

Can't fight the Plastic Walls

no matter how i try

the Plastic Walls dont keep me in

they just keep me out...

-Stormz

Reviews

[Michael X]

works like this are subtle at drawing the readers mind to a delving ponderous moment,
in this regards i can say that i remember reading this poem, divisive intention, i believe
this work is written as intended, the raw emotional projection is powerfully concieved,
which in turn creates the foundation for which the passionate structure is build upon,
the meaning, in my opinion, is the fundamental breakdown, when artificial walls close in,
i feel a certain classicness entwining the vivid imagery, eloquent wording, artful form,
layout, the contemporary abstract definition, i really enjoyed this poem, and its ability
to effect the heart melanie, thank you for sharing, mike

[Angel's Lady]

the Plastic Walls dont keep me in
they just keep me out...

Are they still keeping you out? Expressing your emotions so well, you paint such a picture with your words.

[vanishing]

mel-this poem speaks on many levels
I love the abstract observation
plastic walls blocking out speaks our times
its as if the world is turned upside down
and convext..
beautifully done

[Albert Freeman]

We'll tear down those plastic walls together. As always I love the way you write poetry. You continue to inspire me. xxx