Sister's Mine

Sister's Mine

A Poem by Nely Amorim

I have 6 sisters. This is for all of them.... with love. Adele, Filomena, Louisa, Aurora, Valerie, AnnaPaula...



Sister's Mine,

When you weep, I feel tears trace down my cheeks

When you scream, I absorb your pain

When you are afraid, I fear for you

When you've reached your limits

I will carry the load ..


Sister's Mine,

your strength is stronger than you know

Your courage courageous

Your humour ... makes me giggle

Your boundless love all encompassing


Sister's Mine,

You don't know how precious you are

How much I admire, love and respect you

I am here for you, as you've been there for me


Sister's Mine,

I smile fondly when I remember

Times you've made me laugh till I cried

When we cried till we laughed

When all we could do was hold each other

I will always hold you in my heart...


© 2008 Nely Amorim

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Beautiful poem,!

Posted 4 Years Ago

im speechless - the love and care behind each word is breathtaking. in reading this, it reminds you of every soul in your life - whether it be a sister, or a girlfriend - and how much you deeply adore them. this is amazing!

Posted 9 Years Ago

beautiful, loving and endearing melanie, this is beautiful and captures
what love you hold unconditionally for those you hold close to your heart,
the bond that cannot be broken, one can feel your heart in every word,

Posted 9 Years Ago

this is a really great piece Melanie. you really expressed how strong the bond between siblings can be. great work. =]

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe so very beautiful and heartfelt... those bonds of siblings can be so strong and special that even hen you are at odds there is nothing you won't do for one another... very beautifully done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Beautiful writing, Stormz! Very emotional and raw honesty filled with a strong bond.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a beautiful, emotional piece. i love it. makes me wish i had a sister. well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, such a beautiful thing to have this strong sisterhood that you can always rely and count on. You are truly lucky to have so many amazing sisters and they lucky to have you...
great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Nely Amorim
Nely Amorim

Fremantle, West Australia, Australia

I have enjoyed reading all types of novels since as far as I can remember, a love of reading encouraged by my Mother, even at expense to her own interests. Stormzz I have neglected this site fo.. more..

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