The Both Of Us Are Different

The Both Of Us Are Different

A Poem by ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀
"

She saw the world one way, I saw it the other way

"
She lives in the peek of Heaven, 
I live in the darkest depths of Hell, 
The conversation we have everyday makes me sick, 
But I felt like I couldn't live without it. 

Our talk is mostly one sided. 
We were completely different, 
She see the world one way, 
I saw it the other way. 

Even if we are completely opposite....
We are completely different 
that is probably why our conversation never fails to entertain me. 
I have a feeling that maybe She and I can be frie-

"No, I don't want to" 
"You'll interrupt me even in a freestyle poem I am making up" 
"If you're writing a poem, put your feelings in it" 
"No, I love sugarcoating things"

© 2015 ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀


Author's Note

❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀
Freestyle! or just put a bunch of random words together and say it's a freestyle poem

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I only swim.... Freestyle!
Lol had to throw that out there.
I love the concept, the story and idea. Kinda makes me think of Izaya-Chan from Drrr!
Seems like something he'd say.
A few phrasing mistakes but who cares? Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it!
Short, but not too short!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 18, 2014
Last Updated on April 11, 2015
Tags: romance, love, slice of life

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