The Millisecond of the Twelfth Hour

The Millisecond of the Twelfth Hour

A Poem by ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀
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The Millisecond of The Twelfth Hour

I am the one who marked the beginning 
and I am the one who will mark the ending.
I will trap the flow of time in a bottle 
Just to throw it in the ocean of memories.
I will leave this tragic magic in the ocean of memories.
To wander in nothingness left alone in a bottle.
Behold the final chapter of this farce saga,
Where this tragic magic finally meets it's ending.


Where the flow of time finally stops,
and one stubborn God finally accepted it's end.
It's the time where this Stubborn God call it quits.
It's sad but Every thing has to meet it's end.
As the God of Clockworks swings his clock hand,
One fragment is lost to the ocean of memories,
As the twelfth slash had landed,
The God of Clockworks met it's end.

Let's pick up where the last millisecond left off till the Daybreak of The Dream Fragments opens.
                                                                                                    ~The God of Clockworks~

The ClockWorks Horizon & The Daybreak of The Dream Dragments

© 2014 ❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀


Author's Note

❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀
A review is much appreciated, Much Obliged

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really interesting piece of writing... :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very interesting, I like the imagery an story but it seemed to repeat itself a bit.
Anywho, I like the ideas in this, it has great potential and it is a wonderful write. ^^
Hey, can I ask what anime your profile picture's from? It's so cuuuttteeeee!

Posted 9 Years Ago


kclyaine

9 Years Ago

And it's called Rey line
kclyaine

9 Years Ago

If I remembered correctly
Bluefire

9 Years Ago

Interesting =o
This is nice. "I am the one who marked the beginning and I am the one who will mark the ending." This quote made me continue reading this poem/writing.

~Kurayami

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is really good it reminds me of the anime amnesia :) nicely done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, love the idea if this piece. It's amazing, nicely penned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, Much Obliged
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome.

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Added on August 15, 2014
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