The world can be affected- by hatred, anger, rage... jealousy, pain

The world can be affected- by hatred, anger, rage... jealousy, pain

A Poem by Suchita
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though I was good earlier, my pure blood was sucked out somewhat, n monsters grew in it, it couldnt give more of it-so who's the monster, me or them? Nonetheless, my heart needs caging

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I was not like this
it started on early
in life
people came
n sucked your "blood" out
though goodness remains
a monster it becomes
when injustice is done
jealousy, anger, hatred, revenge
seem the only way out
my heart is what I'm talking about
It needs a cage
to protect itself from pain
as well as others 
from violent n bloody rain

© 2017 Suchita



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Self-deprecation is the act of reprimanding oneself by belittling, undervaluing, or disparaging oneself, or being excessively modest. I sense, from your expressive composition, there is an urgent need for release from current circumstances.
We all have the potential for some self-doubt and social anxiety, but in people with a deep sense of personal inadequacy, self-deprecation can become a dominant pattern.
The format, structure and word choice all add to the emphasise of the subject matter in this write – very poignantly executed ... :-)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i love this! its beautiful!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suchita

1 Month Ago

called- our hearts are monsters n our ribs are cages
rhea

1 Month Ago

ahh i did a poem for that contest as well
Suchita

1 Month Ago

it was beautiful!
Self-deprecation is the act of reprimanding oneself by belittling, undervaluing, or disparaging oneself, or being excessively modest. I sense, from your expressive composition, there is an urgent need for release from current circumstances.
We all have the potential for some self-doubt and social anxiety, but in people with a deep sense of personal inadequacy, self-deprecation can become a dominant pattern.
The format, structure and word choice all add to the emphasise of the subject matter in this write – very poignantly executed ... :-)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a strongly emotional post, full of honesty but whilst finely expressed, you have such deep doubt about yourself. Your pain - if real, is so raw. But, why do yourself such injustice? Perhaps you have more spiritual AND physical strength than you think. Awareness of your abundant qualities helps. Perhaps.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Suchita
Suchita

Gurgaon, NCR, India



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