Still

Still

A Poem by Suditi

Still

Mountains climbed,
Skies wandered,
Stars still tease.

Wisdom shared,
Goodwill attained,
Sins still reek.

Elixir tasted,
Problems forgotten,
Refuge still not found.

Money earned,
Respect spent, 
Poverty still around.

Places visited,
Friends conquered, 
Sleep still light.

Prince found,
Love discovered,
Heart still ice.

© 2015 Suditi



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Seems you have had to catch a breath...
"Still" has numerous meanings and "shades", tones, and recognitions.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


i enjoyed its simplicity and issues covered and the truths found in each stanza's last line.


Posted 2 Years Ago


Looks like a bunch of connected haikus. Really nice, you have dealt with every question a person ever asks himself.

Posted 3 Years Ago


You have said a lot in the short poem. I like the thoughts and places you took me.
"Wisdom shared,
Goodwill attained,
Sins still reek."
The above was my favorite. Powerful write my friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on April 18, 2015
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Suditi
Suditi

India



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