Still

Still

Mountains climbed,

Skies wandered,

Stars still tease.

Wisdom shared,

Goodwill attained,

Sins still reek.

Elixir tasted,

Problems forgotten,

Refuge still not found.

Money earned,

Respect spent, 

Poverty still around.

Places visited,

Friends conquered, 

Sleep still light.

Prince found,

Love discovered,

Heart still ice.

Reviews

[Chris]

Seems you have had to catch a breath...
"Still" has numerous meanings and "shades", tones, and recognitions.

[d]

i enjoyed its simplicity and issues covered and the truths found in each stanza's last line.

[Penny]

Looks like a bunch of connected haikus. Really nice, you have dealt with every question a person ever asks himself.

[Coyote Poetry]

You have said a lot in the short poem. I like the thoughts and places you took me.
"Wisdom shared,
Goodwill attained,
Sins still reek."
The above was my favorite. Powerful write my friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote