Questions?

Questions?

A Poem by Suditi

Questions?

How can we question beauty,
Having seen a baby smile?

How can we question courage,
Having heard of a wounded soldier,
Strong and agile?

How can we question hope,
Knowing its what inspires the young boy with cancer, 
to live?

How can we question, unconditional love,
Being blessed with parents,
Who never take, 
But always give?

How can we question faith,
When it makes the old lonely woman,
Feel safe at night ?

How can we question conscience,
Having known men,
Who've done deeds, against their wish,
Just because, they were right?

How can we question sun,
Standing out there,
In the broad daylight?

© 2012 Suditi



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Suditi
Thoughts and comments are welcome.

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Beautiful, I absolutely love this poem. Really great job!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Excellent questions, wonderfully written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


a lot of questions i ll answer some of it with time

Posted 5 Years Ago


are those questions have answer? creative.. great write ;) 100 for this :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


how can we Question your talent
when you write so relevant


Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow, you do have a way with words. Each line teaches one thing and each verse opens one's eye into something. :D I'm so glad to read a fresh new poem from a new friend. And I'm glad that more than words, there's a poet's heart evident in every word. What a flow of emotions. Nice piece of work. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


yo, excelent write. love the poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A powerful and beautiful poem. Your words are true. A wise person can see the beauty in a new day. Best day of life is holding his child. Find laughter and joy over pain and sadness. Thank you for the positive poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Awesome ......thoughtful questions put in such a beautiful manner.....)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Aww, the questions you put forth were so witty and honest. I love the uplifting sense, and also there's this overall idea, How can we question life? and the answer would be this poem as a whole. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme, it just made the poem very rhythmic and fun to read. However, I just found one shortcoming, the last part just felt a little incomplete, I mean, it just didn't feel like the right ending. Like, you were talking about feelings and stuff till now, and then the sun comes out of nowhere, maybe it could be something that sybolizes sun? like, say, pride? or life, or something that would bring back the idea of the poem, and that would make this already brilliant poem, further brilliant. I congratulate you on this great achievement, you have a great way of thinking. Keep writing!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Suditi
Suditi

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