Man up

Man up

A Poem by Suditi
"

Its high time, the girl child killings stop.

"
Man up


If you can't be a father,

At least be a man.

Don't destroy someone,

Just because, you can.

© 2012 Suditi


Author's Note

Suditi
Its not a poem, its not a proper quote, its nothing really..
Just a way of expressing something i feel really strongly for.

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Man has no essence of destroying any one.................women also do the same much profoundly and elegantly...........Its not about sexes , its about the heart.........and If some body can't be a father/Mother then there is always a history behind it............................Lets not criticize someone just because we believe that he/she is that way...............................................But i liked last two lines "

Don't destroy someone,

Just because, you can.

Its certainly give a sense of proud and fear inside a heart which is the worst enemy of human race........................................Sorry if I have written something sarcastic...:-).....................But you have written beautiful 4 liner :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Agreed with suditi:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Actually,
When i say "you cant be a father" i point out those fathers, who are blessed with daughters, and they kill them. The recent infamous girl child killings in the country are an example.
I am sorry if it sounds like.."those who are childless". I did not mean it like that.
But i agree, its not only men..
Even women bear bias at times.
They might not kill. But they do discriminate a lot of times.

Dont be sorry.
Really appreciate your honesty.
Thank you. :)




Posted 12 Years Ago


Man has no essence of destroying any one.................women also do the same much profoundly and elegantly...........Its not about sexes , its about the heart.........and If some body can't be a father/Mother then there is always a history behind it............................Lets not criticize someone just because we believe that he/she is that way...............................................But i liked last two lines "

Don't destroy someone,

Just because, you can.

Its certainly give a sense of proud and fear inside a heart which is the worst enemy of human race........................................Sorry if I have written something sarcastic...:-).....................But you have written beautiful 4 liner :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this ! short and sweet bt to the point. Welldone

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cool one:).well said:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well expressed and so true of many womens's lives.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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