Something, someday

Something, someday

A Poem by Suditi

Something, someday.

Something tells me, I can.
Something tells me I will.
Something tells me I'll make it there,
Something tells me I'll kill,
All my fears, which hold me back,
Despite the weaknesses, 
the perfection which I lack.
Shut all those, who think, 
I'm not good enough.
All those who say,
I wont make it through the rough.

Someday, I would have moved the mountain,
Someday, I would have crossed the fence,
Someday, it will all prove to be worth,
Someday, it will all make sense.

I know I have it somewhere,
What makes me different from others,
By own unique bit,
Someday, I know,
I would have found it.

© 2012 Suditi



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Lovely piece with a good flow, the concept is realy inspirational, especially after the first stabza. The middle stanza seemed to reach out for me, told me that everything I cace right now will be worth it later. Anyways, this poem could be thought of as a voice inside of you telling you to hold on. Amazing, just simply amazing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lovely work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


We're all privileged to read such seamless rhyme flow, cadence, and stanza structure. the idea of the sought after "it" is a theme i am reading over numerous of your pieces. There is profound hope in the vision of your speaker, which is deeply moving to witness. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


It rolls and rolls and rolls like summoned molasses and youthful wisdoms. A very worthy read!

Posted 5 Years Ago


an inspiring strong write, full of possibilities. well penned. enjoyed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


something = this is you :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is a very good poem. I can remember it like I remember a song.

Despite the weaknesses,
the perfection which I lack.
Shut all those, who think,
I'm not good enough.

It's simply harmonious. The words seems to flow as easy on my lips. You've done a great job. My applause. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Symbolizes hope & trust in a big way :) Nice

Posted 5 Years Ago


:) very creative! 100 for this poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


i love the vase you have drown here but i adore the flowers you have put in it. great work, nice images, good word picking, it is really great totally. thank you for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Suditi
Suditi

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