Orchard old

Orchard old

A Poem by Suhd
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Pain transforms people

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Mellow rotundity has been garnered
Now, for you I wait, come to me
save me from pining away
taste me.

© 2017 Suhd



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Can you possibly tell me of your intended meaning with your First line? Do you mean Melancholic Inactivity leading to a Physical Transformation of sorts. Psychological Apathy leading to Physical Lethargy? And why does the poem end so abruptly

Posted 2 Months Ago


Suhd

2 Months Ago

Yeah, basically it's about transformation gained with much pain. The first line is bout balance in l.. read more
LuciusGray

2 Months Ago

Fair enough, Elgy
Yearning for a connection is what this poem conjures in me when I read it. We all seek that connection and are deserving of such. Nice work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

5 Months Ago

Thank you...! This yearning is keeping us alive.
I love title that you gave this poem, really captured the sensual essence. This poem was so simple, yet so sharp. Fantastic job! Keep sharing!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely. Again, thought provoking. Well done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Sexual, sensual undertone...beconing. Love it. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Suhd

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much :) You're welcome !
Exquisite piece :) My family owned orchards and they are near my heart. Thank you for the share :) I.I.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Suhd

8 Months Ago

Orchards are so cool :)
Thanks for giving it a read :)
Isabella Ivy

8 Months Ago

You're most welcome :)

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Abbottabad, Pakistan



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