Orchard old

Orchard old

A Poem by Suhd
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Pain transforms people

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Mellow rotundity has been garnered
Now, for you I wait, come to me
save me from pining away
taste me.

© 2017 Suhd



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very thought provoking and profound. Good write

Posted 4 Months Ago


Suhd

4 Months Ago

Thanks a lot.
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Zoe
I really like your word choice here. The lines certainly do have an air of melancholy to them. Reminds of the typical autumn.
Not sure if I deciphered what you exactly wanted to say, but I definitely got a rough idea. Beautiful work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Suhd

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much Zoe. It's basically melancholic.
Can you possibly tell me of your intended meaning with your First line? Do you mean Melancholic Inactivity leading to a Physical Transformation of sorts. Psychological Apathy leading to Physical Lethargy? And why does the poem end so abruptly

Posted 11 Months Ago


Suhd

11 Months Ago

Yeah, basically it's about transformation gained with much pain. The first line is bout balance in l.. read more
LuciusGray

11 Months Ago

Fair enough, Elgy
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Yearning for a connection is what this poem conjures in me when I read it. We all seek that connection and are deserving of such. Nice work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thank you...! This yearning is keeping us alive.
I love title that you gave this poem, really captured the sensual essence. This poem was so simple, yet so sharp. Fantastic job! Keep sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely. Again, thought provoking. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
Sexual, sensual undertone...beconing. Love it. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :) You're welcome !
Exquisite piece :) My family owned orchards and they are near my heart. Thank you for the share :) I.I.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

Orchards are so cool :)
Thanks for giving it a read :)
Isabella Ivy

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome :)

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Abbottabad, Pakistan



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