Misery thy name's idealism

Misery thy name's idealism

A Poem by Suhd
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sea, shore

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Where lotus fields stretch
across miles and miles
Amidst the cluster of aspens 
endlessly smiles the sage stargazing
and spotted sandpipers muse about riverbanks 
Where daunting death and misery denies
to fall upon men and maidens
Where nothing is foul nothing is fair
To lovers mad with despair
There my dwelling lies, come visit someday
Pour into my ear thy sweet voice
so that we can dance.

© 2018 Suhd



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The perfect imagery contrasts the rather sombre tone. The relaxed flow, and beautifully detailed description does create the idyllic yet natural scene, yet the mention of despair and a lack of feeling alludes to a person numbed by love. Surpassed the state of passion love and reached a much higher feeling of contentedness and delicate intimacy, changing your view of the world not fixated on the being of your affection. Thought provoking, lovely piece. And a awesome intriguing title, that I may not totally grasp. I'm so not a fan of a title being the best line of the poem, it spoils the impact when you get to it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Suhd

3 Months Ago

Thanks Emma for this wonderful and deeply insightful review. I have to say, you've given this poem a.. read more
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Zoe
'Where daunting death and misery denies
to fall upon men and maidens'
Love these lines.
A bubbly, bright poem. Wonderful work!

Posted 7 Months Ago


I liked the imagery here, lotus fields river etc is definately a beautiful sight to behold.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thanks much :)
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're welcome ☺
Powerful, elegant, and romantic. What a surprising read. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

You're welcome! Glad you liked it.
Anastasia Purvis

1 Year Ago

I absolutely loved it.
Entirely beautiful. I enjoy your style :) I.I.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

You're too kind :)
Isabella Ivy

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure :)
Beautiful words! I love how you put this together

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much !!!

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Added on March 19, 2017
Last Updated on February 15, 2018
Tags: Spiritual, peace, love, transformation

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Suhd
Suhd

Abbottabad, Pakistan



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