Misery thy name's idealism

Misery thy name's idealism

A Poem by Suhd
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sea, shore

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Where lotus fields stretch
across miles and miles
Amidst the cluster of aspens 
endlessly smiles the sage stargazing
and spotted sandpipers muse about riverbanks 
Where daunting death and misery denies
to fall upon men and maidens
Where nothing is foul nothing is fair
To lovers mad with despair
There my dwelling lies, come visit someday
Pour in my ear your sweet voice
so that we can dance.

© 2017 Suhd



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Zoe
'Where daunting death and misery denies
to fall upon men and maidens'
Love these lines.
A bubbly, bright poem. Wonderful work!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I liked the imagery here, lotus fields river etc is definately a beautiful sight to behold.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

8 Months Ago

Thanks much :)
Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
Powerful, elegant, and romantic. What a surprising read. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Suhd

8 Months Ago

You're welcome! Glad you liked it.
Anastasia Purvis

8 Months Ago

I absolutely loved it.
Entirely beautiful. I enjoy your style :) I.I.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Suhd

8 Months Ago

You're too kind :)
Isabella Ivy

8 Months Ago

Was my pleasure :)
Beautiful words! I love how you put this together

Posted 8 Months Ago


Suhd

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much !!!

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Added on March 19, 2017
Last Updated on March 19, 2017
Tags: Spiritual, peace, love, transformation

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Suhd
Suhd

Abbottabad, Pakistan



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