The Firecracker

The Firecracker

A Poem by Suhd
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Love's a cracker

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Love's a cracker 
Sputter, Hiss, Whoosh, Flash, Crackle, Bang.
That's it.

© 2017 Suhd



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I get it. A very interesting way to look at love. I see the way you have depicted the emergence and growth of love. I wonder if the 'that's it' means that once you've reached the bang there is nothing else or if it means something else altogether. Or as well that love burns brightly for a short period and then wanes into nothingness. Let me know if I am right or wrong. Either way I love it

Posted 3 Months Ago


Suhd

3 Months Ago

You are absolutely right on target. Thanks much for reading and reviewing it. Glad you like it.
Very much so, Suhd. Very much so!

And more often than not, that cracker explodes in our faces.

Universal truth in so few words. Well Done.

Posted 7 Months Ago


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Zoe
Haha, truth peeps from behind those words. Well observed!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Suhd

10 Months Ago

Thank you Zoe :)
Zoe

10 Months Ago

No problem
very short but means a lot. and it's honestly so accurate as well

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot xoxo... :)
Very short but says so much.
A few simple words in how you can relate the feelings of love to a fire cracker.
Quite creative and different I liked it.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thanks much :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Year Ago

Your welcomez :)
That was different. I can see the humor in it though . Good work :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thanks much...!
Cynical... but well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thanks much :)

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