An Errand to live for

An Errand to live for

A Poem by Suhd
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The season of love and heartache

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With her loaded pouch strolled spring
Through country lanes and fields fancying
the scenery of yesteryears while chewing
on basil mint that made her breath, 
the wreath of garlands adorned her ronze hair
And her eyes kept all April to themselves.
She stopped by the pond and beheld in it
Multitudes of forms of life, easy on the eye.
Later sitting upon the grassland wearing white
Cotton over-blouse, now soggy, 
her brow twinkled. She removed from her hair
The jasmine stale and tossed it down gently
Then far she gazed into the empty space
Into the cluster of aspens until mirthless
Became every twig, Until Autumn began to fiddle. 
 

© 2017 Suhd


Author's Note

Suhd
All I wanted to do was to simply depict and experiment on the sudden change in mood. Your comments and thoughts on this :)

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Such a beautiful piece. Humanizing the seasons, giving them life, breath. Something we so often overlook or ignore in our hast. Thanks for bringing in into such light and beauty!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thank you Rosalee :)
Aromatic, romantic and a truly pleasant read.
Smooth in transition and Flow.
Tender heart. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Suhd

7 Years Ago

Thank you Anastasia...!
Stacy Purvis

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome. x
Oh...such elegance; soft and calming. I felt like I was the one in your poem. It was nice to be able to "feel" the scene as I read.
It's a really beautiful piece with great imaginary. Loved it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina H.W.

7 Years Ago

It's my pleasure :)
Bodine

6 Years Ago

Great poem! There's not much about it I'd change.
... i don't know whether you're open to co.. read more
Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thanks much. I'm open to critique so feel free.
I really like this. You accomplished your goal and then some. Stunning structure and graceful style. Bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

7 Years Ago

Thanks much!

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Added on March 26, 2017
Last Updated on July 30, 2017
Tags: nature, beauty, sad, spring, autumn, transformation, scenery

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Suhd
Suhd

Abbottabad, Pakistan



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