The Serenade

The Serenade

A Poem by Suhd


Cologne, the dulcet showers
hit the panoramic pane
As she stands behind the window 
under which I stood and sang.
They're bewitchingly analogous,
Ergo their names I switched,
From now on April is her name

© 2017 Suhd



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This is beautiful in it's unique way. Love this

Posted 4 Months Ago


Suhd

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
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Zoe
Hmm...I see you got a strange penchant for switching one's name with 'april'!! Lol...really don't know why. This piece certainly left me wondering. It is very beautifully written though. Great stuff!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Suhd

6 Months Ago

Zoe, I wanted to portray the poetic beauty. April is spring and sweet fragrance and beauty, so that'.. read more
Zoe

6 Months Ago

Ah, I see. Very welcome!
THIS.

im a fan, this was beautiful

Posted 8 Months Ago


A nice piece of Romanticism.

Made me think of Romeo serenading Juliet underneath her balcony in the moonlight.

Some excellent words used in this piece to create the mood beyond the simplicity of the content.

Nice work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Suhd

9 Months Ago

Thanks much Doodley :)
You create scenes and images and then cherished names. Fulfilling...:)..................

Posted 11 Months Ago


Suhd

11 Months Ago

Thank you Sami for your review...!
Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
I liked the poem. The words led to good place and ending. I like how you use words. Made the reader feel the place and the wonder. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Suhd

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading it. I'm glad you liked it !
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
wow...wonderful work suhd..i loved it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thanks a ton Wajiha :)
Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

my pleasure suhd!
Very nicely written. Bravo

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the review!
Rachid Amrani

1 Year Ago

Thank you sir. I do appreciate your kind words. It means a lot to me. And It was pleasure reviewing .. read more
A very creative piece of work. The words you used created a rhythm that is breath taking. And each line flows smoothly and connects to the next line.

Good work.

Rachid

Posted 1 Year Ago


Suhd

1 Year Ago

Thanks much Rachid.
Rachid Amrani

1 Year Ago

You're welcome.

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