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A Poem by Suicidal Teddybear
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this is something i've ben working on :D hope you like it xxx
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The way you look at me

gives me butterflies

the way you talk can hypnotise

I've only felt this way once before

so i know this feeling for sure

Im in love with a boy

who i thought would never treat me like a toy

 

He's like my brother

but i know there is no other

not now i 've met him

he is my sweetest sin

 

I'm so scared of loosing him

It would be like taking away my oxxygen

He's the one i'm breathign for

He's the one i'm living for

I can;t bare to stay

But it hurts more to go away

 

He's like my brother

But i know there is no other

Not now i've met him

He is my sweetest sin

 

We agreed our friendship was bliss

I said you i would always miss

But you lied to me

I didn't see

The person that you were

But now i know

That the act is all a show


© 2009 Suicidal Teddybear



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I liked this, it's cute and emotional.

A few grammatical errors but none that can not easily be fixed, an example. ' can;t bare to stay' This is an obvious typo as you put a ; instead of a '.

This is a good write and it is nice to read. You really show your emotions through this poem and that is what they are there to do.


Posted 7 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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