The Piano Man

The Piano Man

A Poem by Amanda
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Short and sweet poem about a woman listening to a man playing the piano

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I watch his long fingers,


Mesmerized by the way they move,


The way they flow over the keys unhindered,


The sound is frenzied but smooth.


He’s up there doing something I could never do.


The room is filled with people,


But the music fades them away,


Leaving the stillness of a beetle,


Strange compared to the beautiful disarray.


Everyone must feel this haze,


I can’t be the only fan,


Of the creator of this daze,


The Piano Man.


© 2012 Amanda



Author's Note

Amanda
Inspired by Beethoven's "Moonlight Sonata" I guess. I wish I could ever have the skill to play the piano like that. But I don't.
So sad. :'(

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this is not bad..I don't think you need to force the rhyme by saying 'forever stay' it doesn't sound natural....Maybe if you just dropped the forever it might flow better. I realise you were thinking of a syllable count but in this case it would not matter..just a thought

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Amanda

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the input, I'll be sure to change it

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