Trying

Trying

A Poem by Amanda
"

maybe he never loved me at all

"
He doesn't love me anymore, 
I've got no one else to turn to. 
Tell me, now I'm so alone,
What am I supposed to do?
I've got wounds aplenty,
and I barely sleep at night. 
Maybe the bags under my eyes, 
will tell you how I've been cast from the light.
I've been broken many times before,
but now all I am is a hollowed out shell. 
Watching him thrive now that I'm gone, 
is some kind of personal hell. 
So tell me how I'm supposed to escape, 
when I am but a broken doll trying to fix herself with tape?

© 2013 Amanda



Author's Note

Amanda
it sucks, i know. but its no different from my other writing, so

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Your poetry is so sad. When I read this it really hurt my heart, and I think it hurts so much because it's easy to relate to. I really wish I could help you feel happy, I have an obsession with helping people who feel bad. It's a great poem though, not many poems can make me feel like s**t after reading it. I love reading your poems. And also, I love how you say your a broken doll trying to fix yourself with tape.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.



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Hang in there, things can only get better. All in all a great relatable write

Posted 4 Years Ago


Your writing brings back all the angst of my teen years. It's like reading pages from my old diary.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is very moving and well expressed, it is never a pleasant feeling to feel unloved and rejected and I think you captured those feelings very well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Your poetry is so sad. When I read this it really hurt my heart, and I think it hurts so much because it's easy to relate to. I really wish I could help you feel happy, I have an obsession with helping people who feel bad. It's a great poem though, not many poems can make me feel like s**t after reading it. I love reading your poems. And also, I love how you say your a broken doll trying to fix yourself with tape.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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