Best Friends

A Poem by Amanda

This poem is dedicated to all my lost best friends.

I’m not the best with friends,
Our time always soon ends,
There was Courtney,
Who was the fruity to my tooty,
There was Santiago,
Who was once nicknamed Sandy Taco.

She and I were always together,
Birds of the same feather,
But then I moved away,
And in Bellingham she stays.

Then he and I were never apart,
Until it became a load of clart,
And now here I am,
With three friends I’m afraid to damn.

But it’ll be okay,
They all have best friends for the better day,
When I’m not here,
To shatter everything I hold dear.

© 2012 Amanda

Author's Note

The names I mentioned are true. I haven't seen Courtney for a while though we still try to keep in touch. I had another friend, Doris, that I was very close to but I haven't seen her either. They're best friends now, actually.

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♛ Jordan Midnight..

Awww Tears*

Posted 5 Months Ago

Rhea752

depressing. it can be so painful to have a best friend slip from your grasp. good job.

Posted 11 Months Ago

Kitty Robinson

I nearly cried. BEA-U-TIFUL!

Posted 11 Months Ago

Owlgirl

Easily relatable, and a smooth flow, though the rhyme scheme seemed almost forced, but it's okay. Great job!

Posted 12 Months Ago

Angel

I like this poem. I think i can relate to having lost best friends.

Posted 12 Months Ago

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Added on June 20, 2012
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I lose everything that I touch. So maybe it's a good thing we haven't actually touched. I'm fifteen, damaged and in love. There's nothing else to say really. more..