Midnight Verses

Midnight Verses

A Poem by Sujash I. Purna
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Written from my QWERTY-less cell-phone...so don't bother if it's a bit over-laconic

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I awake, you slumber
In our worlds of two colours

I cringe like a dog
A eunuch in your harem...
You slaughter; in orgies with dames.

I hesitate in hopes, wade in fears.
You, garrulous, feel not alone from cheers.

My wistful sun rises timidly once in a day...
Where there no night of fear for you but when
You're only priapic to play. 

© 2012 Sujash I. Purna


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Good Job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the flow of imagry you create in this piece.

I cringe like a dog

A eunuch in your harem...

You slaughter; in orgies with dames.


You're an amazing poet with talent beyond most poets that I've ever met.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thought thinking and a strong write within these lines in this poem... good write, differently said.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This one is..... scary. :D It's a little too melancholy for me. But a very good poem from Sujash once more. Thank you :)
Take Care.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Strong words (you would not believe how many times i managed to type 'string words' befor getting that right xD) that definately get straight to the point. The flow was soft and gentle, to combat the strong words, and all in all, i'm really impressed. Great work, well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Direct and strong words. Sometime better to write words down the to speak them a loud.
"I cringe like a dog
A eunuch in your harem...
You slaughter; in orgies with dames."
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good! Like the rhyming!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love all of the adjectives used; gives every and anything its own character. There's fear and darkness that you shun from. A little sad but all the same brilliant!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sujash I. Purna
Sujash I. Purna

Kirksville, MO



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Wotcher! I am Sujash and I ramble. I am a freshman at Truman State University from 2012(isn't it this year???!!!). I'm looking forward to a dual major in Creative Writing and Music(Performance) .. more..

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