It's simply fervent write....sometimes we want our beloved one's to understand us before we tell them what we feel...those are fortunate who have such caring partners....but never know how it feels to wish goodbye to the one whom we don't want to leave us....loved reading this! Thanks for sharing :)
Very poignant theme with a gentle flow from beginning to end, with that final portion of the poem really driving your emotions home to the reader. Singing adios.....that's a nice line.
All in all, this is another step up the poetic ladder. Nice work.