Growing pains

Growing pains

A Poem by NANCY DON
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For you

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Tears last summer
Dried in winter
Made wet in rains
By your bylanes

Your umbrella
Is yellow
Like the sunbeams
An angel's halo

Tell me
You wont
Leave me
Even if
We sing
Adios

© 2018 NANCY DON


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It's simply fervent write....sometimes we want our beloved one's to understand us before we tell them what we feel...those are fortunate who have such caring partners....but never know how it feels to wish goodbye to the one whom we don't want to leave us....loved reading this! Thanks for sharing :)

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Well done again with this one.

Very poignant theme with a gentle flow from beginning to end, with that final portion of the poem really driving your emotions home to the reader. Singing adios.....that's a nice line.

All in all, this is another step up the poetic ladder. Nice work.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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NANCY DON
NANCY DON

Dimapur, Nagaland, India



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