Young Life

Young Life

A Poem by Sunshine Kid

 

She dances
And giggles
Because that’s
All she knows.
She can live
Life
Squealing with joy
And smiling
At the little
Things
(Like a nest
Of birds
Or
A green leaf
Right before
Winter ends)
For isn’t that
How life
Is supposed
To be
Lived?
There are
No
Punctuation marks
In her life
Only
Commas
Because nothing
Ever ends
For her
There may be
A pause
(Many pauses
In fact)
But it all
Comes back
Nothing is
Forgotten
Every memory
Is a favorite
Color
She’ll stay
Young forever
Because that’s
Life.

© 2008 Sunshine Kid



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I am being taken on a soulful journey. I am lying with my back on the wings of a giant bird and she takes me soaring high across big white clouds, and for some reason, I don't wish for the journey to come to an ed. That's exactly how I feel about this poem of yours. More like watching the narrator delve both in and out of the lady's life ... so very beautifully.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I love this work. It is so blissfully flowing with the joy of life. I love the idea of life as a run on sentence. LOL Wonderful work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am being taken on a soulful journey. I am lying with my back on the wings of a giant bird and she takes me soaring high across big white clouds, and for some reason, I don't wish for the journey to come to an ed. That's exactly how I feel about this poem of yours. More like watching the narrator delve both in and out of the lady's life ... so very beautifully.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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