Icon Of A True Heart.

May Mother Teressa with us, when in need of Love.

Never a day I smiled,
Never a day I helped,
Never I had humanity,
Never I left studying a book,
Never heard of an old woman who
came to my country for service of others,
Never before, I Heard of her,
Every thing in never , Lead me to a book, where I
Never placed it aside on go.
Now I Will never be the one,
The one I before, after a woman indeed a great a woman
Who pondered mercy on us,
And made me look into the world with merciful eyes, The woman
Mother Teressa, I am not a part of your
Life struggle, I wish I could be your brother.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Lovely heartfelt poem to comfort and give to Mother Teressa who gave her all to others. A hug and kindness in return.

[Surya]

Grateful I am! Thank you, dee...:)

[Riddhi]

This is really nice and I loved the way you described everything ...And actually Mother Teresa was really a great figure ...I loved the way you carved out your thoughts in this piece...
Well done and keep it up..
Keep on writing...

[Surya]

Sure, Thank you...:)))

[barleygirl]

WOW! This is so original & unexpected! I love the humility & the humble tones . . . I find Mother Teresa to be very humbling indeed! Your message is so straightforward & from the heart, not made fancy with profound declarations, but simply showing us your response to this wonderment (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mustafa]

Surya life is surely a struggle , it is a beautiful poem but I suggest some changes because of the grammar which I think it is wrong in some places such as "Never I had humanity,
Never I left studying a book,
Never heard of an old woman"

[Surya]

Ohh sure you can...and possibly give me the correct one to manage here...:)

[Mustafa]

I have never smiled a day
I have never helped a day
I have never had humanity
I have never been left to study a book
I have never heard
never before, I've heard
the one before me
that was a kind of hard:)) you have to review my stories now:))

[Surya]

Sure my frnd, I will reflect u in minutes...sorry am l'll busy...but I will surely visit them in minutes....Thank you so much...:)

[shriya mehta]

nice work it is...keep going !

[Surya]

Thank you Shrriya for your kind visit and words...:)

[Pravir]

Good one surya ji. . . . as expected from you . . . you never dissapoimt as a writer. . . today we rarely come across poems like this . . . thanx for introducing this icon of true heart to the world once again . . . great worl

[Surya]

Thank you so much Pravir...:)

[writ rajat]

very nice to read this ty

[Surya]

Thanks again for compliment...am glad you liked it

[duff]

There is definitely always room in the world for more people like her. Optimism and warmth can be contagious. I like the message Surya. Nice work!

[Surya]

Yeah there is...Thank you Duff...:)

[duff]

You got it:)

[Zephyr]

I too thought about writing a poem on our dear Mother, but I don't think it would be as good as yours.
She truly is the Icon of a true Heart.
A really great work, Surya:)

[Surya]

Try it, am sure it would be wonderful...and I will be happy if you write one...Thank you Neetha for your warm visit and words...:)

[Zephyr]

Yes I will try:)
My pleasure

[Psychotic Lily]

As I read the poem it felt a lot like me or students who are so immersed in their studies that they didn't care for the world around them, until someone came along and realized not everything is about school. And I was amazed that it was Mother Theresa. Great job!

[Surya]

It's purely fictional higlighting the kindness and humanity in Mother teressa, to be honest I never read about mother teressa.....
Thank you so much for your kind visit and words, am glad for them...:)