Freedom.

Please, let me fly,

Let me free,

Let me dream,

Don't stop me,

Let my wings free.

I want to travel,

I want to meet people,

I want to die for me in me,

Please let me try.

But I want you as

Wind beneath my wings,

I want you as a force to push me,

I want you to be a dream

On which I won't give up.

I want you to be a sweet memory for me,

Not as a ruler to make my rules.

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

Yes, of course. This one is truly a good piece balancing out the want for an adventure and the want for a support. Thank you for sharing.

[Surya]

Yep exactly, and thank you for your words, am glad you enjoyed...:)

[Manasa.L]

This is something that everyone wish. Let all your wishes come true. Strive hard for it and never let your dreams or freedom slip away.

[Surya]

Sure Manasa ji, Without them am not who am, Thank you for your kind words and visit...:)

[Stacy Purvis]

Be free, Fly like a bird away from the nest. Such frustration and raw emotion. Thank you for sharing!

[Surya]

Yep I try, I felt soo....Thank you for your kind visit and words...:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

This was lovely ! The last two lines were impressive! Thanks for sharing

[Surya]

Thank you for your words and visit..:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

My pleasure :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Good thoughts. Great compassion in the last line. I liked it. Very well written.

[Surya]

Am glad you liked, Thank you for your kind visit..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

This is lovely, very good use of words 😉

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan,...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem.
"I want you to be a sweet memory for me,
Not as a ruler to make my rules."
Locked door and self-made prisons make us convicts, not lovers. Thank you Surya for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Beautiful lines with an exceptionally stunning flow.
Desires of human nature are conveyed wilfully!
Loved the 3rd stanza..
Keep writing:)

[Surya]

Thank you Tazeen.

[Biswajeet Samal]

Good one bro keep it up..

[Surya]

Thank you brother.

[Biswajeet Samal]

Read my new poem

[Surya]

yeah Sure brother

[Valentine]

I think we all long for personal freedoms. Valentine

[Surya]

Yeah.Thank you.