Truth..

Why is it hidden?

Where is the truth hidden?
Behind the flawless modern beasts or
Behind the flawless emotions of
Ancient man, is it that way?.

Is it that you are hiding the bonding spirit
Made us together or you just dont need me?
Your tears say it all but you are 
A modern beast leaving this ancient man behind.

Why do you cry, when I'm sobbing here,
Is it this way you desired to see me
Or is it my hallucination seeing you cry,
Anyway am fed up with these modern pschology..

Am fed up with the society,
Am fed up with the beasts here,
Am fed up with you,
Am fed up with me.

Just a tree I deserve,
Just a smoke I love,
Just a flame burning in me,
Just me I want to be..

Reviews

[Zephyr]

I appreciate the way you began your poem:)
The innocence symbolised i ancient man and crookedness in modern beasts is very thought provoking:)
An emotional and touching read!
As usual, great work!!

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you Neetha...:)

[Zephyr]

My pleasure

[Priyanshi]

I felt this poem was heart touching....really, I loved it so much....last two paragraphs are my fav.
Keep it up, Surya.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Priyanshi..:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

very well written....great work...

[Surya]

Thank you so much Wajihaa...:)

[Sofia]

Well written..i liked it... great job...keep it up :)

[Surya]

Thank you Sofia..:)

[Sofia]

Most welcum :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

that's a passionate write... i liked the way it was ended... well done surya...good work :)

[Surya]

Thank you Abhishek..:)

[John F Carver]

For the Tree a cost
The last of Love vanishing
His Blood in my beard

Jesus is the truth to me.

[Surya]

Everyone has their own opinion and I agree with you..:)

[John F Carver]

You make me miss even the hardest parts of romance or is it Jesus?

[Surya]

Well, haha, I guess both or former..:)

[Giulia King]

So much passion in this one! Loved reading it!

[Surya]

Thank you Gullia for your time reading it...:)

[Stacy Purvis]

Full of Passion. I adore the realness feel in this piece. Thank you for sharing!

[Surya]

Am glad you enjoyed reading this...Thank you for your kind words and visit...:)

[Stacy Purvis]

I reread it this morning. I enjoy it very much. xxx

[Surya]

Oh am honored then...

[Surya]

Thanks a lot, keep visiting...:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is so well composed! I feel Everything and everyone is hiding the truth form us. And we need some time to believe others and ourselves

Wow! Thanks for sharing :D

[Surya]

Yes, I agree...Thank you for your kind visit..:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

My pleasure!