Why?

Why?

A Poem by Surya
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Just a scribble..

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Why is it so?..
A Depressed heart weighs more than a smile on a pretty face,
There is no destination for flowing tears from a bleeding heart,
No cavalry to win over own emotions,

 Haha! Oh dear, for every being here, no peace and no ease..

What a creation it is....

© 2017 Surya



Author's Note

Surya
Scribbled lines may be or may not be worthy at all..

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so true suryaa.....nicely penned!!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Surya

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much Wajiha...:)
In a way, here's how I read you . . . being depressed seems to come so "easily" . . . but being happy takes EFFORT! We need to vow to find the brighter side of things every day rather than let the CRAP of life buffet us around, huh? *smile*

Posted 7 Months Ago


Surya

7 Months Ago

Haha, Yeah, effort is needed and we have to find a brighter side..Thank you Margie for your kind vis.. read more
Your scribbled lines are truly worthy.
Its so true that it is hard to win over emotions. Keep writing 😊


Posted 7 Months Ago


Surya

7 Months Ago

Thank you Naat for your kind visit, will reflect soon...:)
Wow... this is so true! It's a short and sweet write Surya :) Sorrows may change to happiness soon

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Haha, just waiting for that day...
Well, Thank you Shaan for your kind visit..:)
Mr.Writer

8 Months Ago

No problem! :)
What an inspired poem! It is not just a scribble, it is a MEDITATION. And what is more it sounds as if itcomes straight from the heart.
I have been inspired to read more of your work.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Yup, straight from heart..Am glad for your words...hope you enjoy all of them..Keep visiting..:)..Th.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

8 Months Ago

I will, I wll, I will, I will!
But it looks some kind of fun with true beings, when you get a time to relieve, and others take advantage of it, saying i must be the true bearer of your love, as in first come first serve.

Heart is place of emotions, brain is place of making ethical thinking, person reacts to both only when both works together. And we separate our own body saying that is heart , this brain, and this is me bearing the pain.

This poetry written long back, but if we clear out missunderstandings of our beings then no need to bear pain, no need to get pain even to smile.

Please dont missunderstand my thoughts. Everyone's life is precious, there is nobody made wrong while borning, we just turn ourself to worthless and precious as per our needs.

Posted 8 Months Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Surya

8 Months Ago

Nothing wrong you said...yeah it's precious....Thank you Jessy for your kind review..:)
It's Worthy my friend..Keep Sharing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Thank you Johnny..:)
Maybe perpetual thoughts about a depressed broken heart weighs heavy.. the more we think the more we layer more 'paint' or veils or darkness. Whereas smiles come from the heart, they twinkle, they glide.. we feel right, relaxed, at peace. Methinks it's up to each to decide which to have and act accordingly whenever possible. Not always possible but...

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Your words are kind and a thanks for them...Hope the same to continue...Thank you, Emma..
emmajoy

8 Months Ago

Waving, just looking in to see if all's quiet!
Surya

8 Months Ago

Yep..all's good..:)
Way too much truth behind this. Love it!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Thank you, am glad you liked it...
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Taz
This touched me in a way. It is most definately something that is part of something great.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much....keep visiting...:)

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