Without You...

Without You...

A Poem by Surya
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With You, It's true...

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Without you 
mirror doesn't reflect me,
There is no soul in my body,
No pen of mine can write,
No memory of mine is complete.
Every drop of rain striking me
Reminds your touch,
Each melody from waving trees 
Reminds your smiling music.
Every Portrait I sketch reminds
How I miss your magical eyes,
Every tune I play reminds
Your salsa with me.
Every step of mine reminds
Your silly dreams with me,
Every smile of your's 
is a treasure for me.
With you
I can breathe,
I can live,
I smile,
I dance.

© 2017 Surya


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Good job this is great ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind visit and your time R&R.,,:)
Best thing you did so far, go on Surya!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Haha, Thank you Rassoul...:)
This might be my favorite that I've read of your work. Everything about it I like. Especially the way you closed it out. Great job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Ohho, Thank you Duff for yyour visit and words...:)
duff

6 Years Ago

Anytime my friend
Its a totally adorable poem...
The imagery you painted is wonderful...
One of the best poems I have read!
Really great work....:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Haha, Thank you so much Naat....:)
Zephyr

6 Years Ago

my pleasure...
This is beautifully written! It's not the kind of "love" that I am familiar with, but I know lots of people can relate to this feeling, being "less" without one's beloved. I don't like the feeling of becoming lost without another person, so I don't really enjoy the idea of this kind of love. But since it's a true feeling for many, you've done a great job of showing how it might feel, complete with many well-chosen details to illustrate the situation for this narrator!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Haha, some times some do feel the same...
well Thank you Margie...:)
gorgeously written...emotional write... !!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Yeah, Thank you Abhishek...:)
great work surya!!
that's such a touching poem...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you Wajiha...:)
Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

pleasure surya:)
Wow, so beautiful poem. "Every smile of your's is a treasure for me "......... is so sweet line. I really loved it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Priyanshi for your kind visit and words, Keep visiting...
Am glad you enjoy.. read more
wow what a beautiful poem u have written its so romantic and sweet.How I miss your magical eyes so beautiful line.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you Manisha for your kind visit, am glad you enjoyed..:)
"every tune I play reminds
Your salsa with me"
My favorite lines. Loved this one!😀

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you Anjali for your visit and am glad you enjoyed it...:)
Anjali

6 Years Ago

No problem!😄

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