A Soldier..

A Soldier..

A Poem by Surya
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Tribute to them..

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Huge heart to
Survive in bullets,
Burning desire 
To make flag to float in air..

A day away from home
I feel bored and alone,
Months away from home
You feel brave and patriotic..

Everyone salutes a Flag,
None sees the person
Made it fly..Stand in air..

For me no Iron man, No batman,‎
A soldier, a live hero than a comic role..
A salute for your sacrifice
Just to see us enjoy our freedom
And protecting the nation..

© 2017 Surya



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Love the comic references... Patriotic poem with a tinge of geek, haha... Well penned...!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Thank You Silente..:)
Silente

9 Months Ago

Of course... My pleasure
I do believe it is not easy to be one. Moments of fear, missing the family and great search for survival. They too are heroes in front. They truly live not for money nor fame but for chivalry and patriotism. Nice piece for them. :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Hope so, Thank you my friend..:)
A very heartfelt tribute to the soldiers. Original and wonderful expression of patriotism and respect.
Well written here

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Thank you Michael, yeah a patriotic tribute to our brave soldiers..:)
That is a great tribute, Surya. Simple, superb and very well penned craft. I can feel the feeling, emotion and gratitude very well woven in this short piece. Very well done!


Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Just a bit from me to them...Thank Bala for your kind visit and words..:)
Everyone salutes a flag none sees the person made it fly. This is my favourite line. It is very thoughtful and beautifully expressed the love, sacrifices of a soldier. I truly liked this.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

That's true rite, Than you Najam for your kind visit and am glad you liked it..:)
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
I agree my friend.
"For me no Iron man, No batman,‎
A soldier, a live hero than a comic role..
A salute for your sacrifice
Just to see us enjoy our freedom
And protecting the nation.."
The sad part of our world. Need soldiers. I pray one day we won't . Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Yeah John waiting for that day, Thank you for your visit..:)
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
Yeah, you are right, soldiers are the real heroes they sacrificed much more than we know, just for us.
No batman no iron man
Soldiers are indeed real heroes

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Yes Farhan, well, Thank you for your visit...:)
I cannot say anything on this. This is very lovely writing, full of patriotism. Thanks for sharing. Loved reading it. Salute to those men who are fighting for us.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Surya

9 Months Ago

Yeah a Patriot, haha, Thank you Manasa for your kind visit am glad you enjoying my works..:)
Manasa.L

9 Months Ago

Yeah I do..:)
I love it. Beautifully comprising work of art and tribute to those who've survive the days of madness and bloodshed to become the heroes they are. They are not forgotten and they will always be in our hearts. Great tribute!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Thank you Richard for your warm visit am glad you enjoyed...and yeah they are never forgotten..:)
It's a good tribute to all those brave men who guard our nation with their life. And we enjoy our peaceful life...
They loose sleep in the cold...still they stay focused even in the challenging situations...it's these brave men who makes our life secure...
I thoroughly enjoyed it surya..

Posted 9 Months Ago


Surya

9 Months Ago

Oohho, thank you Ria, am glad you enjoyed. ..

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