A Beautiful Thing....I Feel As..

A Beautiful Thing....I Feel As..

A Poem by Surya
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What is the most beautiful feel to sense ...

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Science seeking Einstein's brain or
Popping beats of Jackson,
Enthusiastic smile or
Maddening glance of Monroe.

Melodies from motherly nature or
Black and whites in Piano,
Utterly speech of cuckoo or
Moustache of Chaplin.

Rising sunrise or 
Midnight moon,
Twinkling stars or
Dance in ocean.

The above all can be seen,
But intangible bonding threads
Between the hearts can never be seen
And that's the most beautiful thing.

© 2017 Surya



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I like this ! Keep writing

Posted 3 Months Ago


Surya

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your time stopping by...Am glad you liked it...:)
Beautifully expressed! Yes, you are right.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Surya

4 Months Ago

Haha, Thank you...:)
this poem is loooveee xDD

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you Asmae...:)
Amazing use of words.
"The above all can be seen,
But intangible bonding threads
Between the hearts can never be seen
And that's the most beautiful thing."
I enjoyed the complete poem and the above lines. I agree with my friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much John...:)
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome Surya.
"Maddening glance of Monroe"
From Einstein to Monroe. They all are different person's yet you nailed putting them together in a great piece of yours. Well done. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Ohh...thank you so muchhhh...:)
my heart just melted reading thiss

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Ohh, pretty then...Thank you so much for your kind visit and words...:)
Loved the second stanza . . . beautifully described . . keep sharing

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Pravir..:)
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Taz
My favorite stanza is the third. Is is the smallest but explains the most. Beautiful job.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Ohh..I love it too....Thank you Taz...:)
A beautifully lined up poem with rather most beautiful words. Indeed they are the most beautiful thing. Loved those lines. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Manasa for your words and visit...:)
Your initial choices are instantly and enjoyably visible in the mind.. But, how true what you say.. '.. intangible bonding threads. ~ Between the hearts can never be seen ~ And that's the most beautiful thing.' Such a beautiful train of thought, words finely laid.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Emma..:)

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