An End But Travelling Goes On...

An End But Travelling Goes On...

A Poem by Surya

It's an end and 
Prince founded crown
Hidden in deep blue 
Effervescent ocean..

Beats of broken heart
Stopped playing,
Peace is the only game
They started lending..

Days of sorrow habituated,
Memories stopped crying,
A leaf grown now on a
Moonlit ocean standing by storms.

Every seed sown doesn't 
Need to grow, 
Every step of your's 
Doesn't pay happiness...

But Travelling goes on
Till the end.....

© 2017 Surya



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Well said Surya, the journey goes on whether there a joy or sorrow. A deep one! Well penned!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Surya

4 Months Ago

It goes on..Thank you Bala for your kind visit...:)
Oceans of long words, princes and crowns, moonlit storms, sown seeds... Every step of the way does not guarantee happiness... But keep going till the end... Excellently penned...

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much....:)
Silente

5 Months Ago

You are ever so welcome...
This message feels a bit abstract for my reading abilities. I like all your surprising & creative imagery, but I don't follow it like a cohesive message thru-out (just a preference, not a problem). My favorite part: "Every seed sown doesn't need to grow . . . every step of yours doesn't pay happiness" . . . can be a tough life lesson for some. But it can also apply to the writing life . . . everything we write doesn't have to be perfectly crafted & I find the less polished pieces to be more interesting sometimes becuz the gut-level feelings in the message are so true to life.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Polished work always seems to be polished but it's my heart that speaks and I transfer them onto pap.. read more
so true...so relieving...so wonderful....so surya!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

So thanks To Wajihaa...:)
Wajiha Nayeem

5 Months Ago

hahha.....
"Beats of broken heart
Stopped playing,
Peace is the only game
They started lending.."

Loved this stanza the most. Sometimes the mind travels far more than the body..
Nicely penned, Surya. I enjoyed reading this :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Yumna, But I loved every bit of it,...Hahaha...:)
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

You're welcome, Surya. A pleasure always :)
we travel all our lives for real or in memory
our minds evolve

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Yeah, I agree...and Thank you Wordman...:)
Life is a travel......
The fourth stanza is very meaningful.
Thanks for sharing......

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you Naat for your kind visit....:)
Neetha

5 Months Ago

My pleasure ☺
Very nice read..
I like the third stanza more than the rest.
And the poem is truly awesome.
Well done surya..

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Farhan..:)
Every seed sown doesn't
Need to grow,
Every step of your's
Doesn't pay happiness...

this is really well written. the message here is extremely powerful. i loved the poem over all

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Pia for your kind visit and words, am glad you enjoyed...:)
"It's an end and
Prince founded crown
Hidden in deep blue
Effervescent ocean.. "

At first I thought this one talks about an erotic scene. Lol, It kinda change on the last part. Anyways, I like the peace sound on this poem. Well done. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Surya

5 Months Ago

haha...Thank you dear friend..:)

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