Solution From  A Problem

Solution From A Problem

A Poem by Surya

Finding darkest treasures in a scary night,
entered an old mysterious cave, no way out,
no lights though, ony a violin to turn off fear
Found a scary ghost but it's beautful, twinkling in white gown.

Trembling in fear after those reflecting waves of 
Feary warnings from that beauty in a gown,
Now teaching up's and down's in a life 
Boosting up after her words, gaining energy to face this world..

And night ended after the glowing rays visiting old cave,
Now I could see the ghost as a beautiful lady, confused, 
And asked what is the truth, Nights's vision of Ghostly look or
Finest beauty in Morning? 

She answered

It's your state of mind seeing things defines your vision,
Am a beauty in morning rays as everyone could see,
Am a ghost to them who sees darkest of visions,
But am a beauty in a hidden treasure of beasty dark.

It's upto you to see me as you desire,
But am a beauty in a beast,
A light in dark, a melody in evil,
But am a Lesson if you wanna learn...


I got it now, It's our perception of determining
Every moment in lives determines our life,
So there is a beauty in every evil if we could see,
Every Hardest and strangest moment have a solution
If we have eyes and brains could foresee the solution Instead of sobbing....

© 2017 Surya



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Nice poem. I enjoyed the read thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Months Ago


a bit different from others... so creative,,, really liked this unique piece of writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Haha, Thank you so much Abhishek, glad you liked it...:)
wow this is what I'm talking about...an organized poem...well penned

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind visit and words...:)
Amazing story in the poetry dear Surya.
"It's upto you to see me as you desire,
But am a beauty in a beast,
A light in dark, a melody in evil,
But am a Lesson if you wanna learn..."
I liked the complete poem and the above lines are true. Life is decisions and chooses. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Yep I agree, life is decisions and choices one would choose, Thank you John....:)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Surya.
Individual variances and how we deal with each moment. Negativity lingers if we feed it and beauty grows if we allow it. You did a great job on this. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping by...:)
duff

1 Year Ago

You're welcome:)
This is a very creative way to show instead of telling about how our attitudes define what we see in a thing. Your example (stanza following: "she answered") is well-stated to be all-encompassing rather than specific. Imaginative way to convey an important life lesson.

Posted 1 Year Ago


perceptions....just like reading poetry, we see what we see...sometimes deep meanings, sometimes surface meanings...it just depends on perception...and how well we look.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Yeahh, It's all upto how we look..
Thank you J...:)
beautiful thoughts,you see with your mind and heart

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Both are necessary....Thank you wordman.. :)
Its great and you really inspired me....
We just have to be positive and find the solution instead of worrying.........
A great work.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Naat...:)
Neetha

1 Year Ago

My pleasure......
Wow! This is just awesome Surya! The moral of the story clearly came up without being confusing...
Keep it up :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

I guess so...Thank you so much Shaan...:)
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