Scatteted Drops...

Scatteted Drops...

A Poem by Surya

Drops gazetting their silver bolts
On a skin showing affection of a person
Broken into pieces same as the sprinkling
droplets which could never be united again to a drop...

Your face scattered in those droplets
And summer dried them away,
Now just waiting for the rain to 
Grow beautiful forest from the drops again..

© 2017 Surya


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MCS
An elegant write....thank you

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you for kind visit and words, am glad for them...:)
generous piece of writing... keep it up

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you Abhishek...:)
Gentle and strong use of words and thoughts in the poetry. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the true ending. Rain is life. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you John...:)
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
memories are just drops from our minds

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

True wordman...Thank you...:)
Did anyone notice the misspelling in the title? (scattered??!?!)

I'm impressed by your use of this unusual word that sent me to the dictionary: "gazetting" (good word choice!) I also love your imagination in describing a drop being scattered into droplets & never again to be reunited . . . I'm blown away by the way your mind dissects such little aspects of life. This could be a metaphor to represent the way our lives can be scattered into many different unrecognizable pieces that can never go back together the way it used to be. I've had that happen. And sometimes it takes quite a bit of time to adjust & start to grow beautifully once again. The last line really sings for me . . .

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Haha, I will correct it,
Thank you so much Margie....am glad you liked it...:)
"droplets which could never be united again to a drop..."
Loved this line. It does feel like broken scattered drops of memories..
Very well penned, Surya :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

yeah they are...Thank you Yumnaa...:)
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

You're welcome, Suryaa 😛 😊
Beautiful, memorable and delicate piece Surya!
Keep it up :)


Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you Shaann...:)
oooo i like this.

it is doubtful we can recapture moments that split apart...but if there are enough good memories, we will hope to have the relationship be reborn.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Yeah, Thank you J for for your kind visit and words...
A short and sweet poem......
I felt so calm reading it.
Keep it up........

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Ohhoo, You did enjoyed then...Thank you Naat..am glad you enjoyed...:)
Zephyr

6 Years Ago

My pleasure......
the last para. was beautifully written, especially those lines depicting that face scattered in those droplets and summer dried them away.... a nice poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Ohh..that's sweet..Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

You're welcome , Surya.

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