Mom...

Mom...

A Poem by Surya
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Mother's day

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The very first day of my life you believed in me,
Everyday may not be a day without you,
Everyday doesn't seem to pass without your voice,
Everyday is worthy with your beautiful eyes,
Every word from you is music for me,
My dear mom it's your day, Mother's Day,
Now a days I miss you more and more
seeing true colours of this filthy world,
But I found one friend same like you,
Cares a lot and hates a lot, but she is you,
Though she couldn't match you,
Mom, a word means my world,
Thank you,
For your patience at my stupidity,
For tolerating me as who am,
For Being my mom, Love you beauty...

© 2017 Surya


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What do we do without mom? we think about how much we miss her.

Heart felt and raw, much enjoyed sir.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you Mr.e for your kind visit and words...:)
So good , i always love poems based on mothers. Yours is so lovely and brilliant!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Fathom, am glad for your visit and words...:)
Lovely!! I really love poems dedicated to mothers...mothers are like superheroes...A beautifully penned write..Thank you for sharing..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Yep they are....Thank you Sofia..:)
Sofia

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
I like it so much well written...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much...:)
Very nice poem dedicated to your mom. Mother is such an angel to this Earth... Too nice writing. Last line was very delightful. Glad to read such a poem after a long time. Keep it up.
Have lots of care for your mom.
Happy mother's day to all the loving moms in this world...
Delightful writing...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you...:)
I really really liked it, a lot! The last lines are my favorite, just beautiful. I'm sorry I wasn't able to review before on this amazing poem. A brilliant poem, indeed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

ohhh..So kind of you, Thank you sooo much Anjali....Hope you had a great Mother's day with ur Mom..... read more
Anjali

6 Years Ago

Same to you!😁
this is soo respectful and nice.....wish ur mum a happy mother's day from my side...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Sure I will, Thanks a lot Wajiha for your kind visit and words..:)
Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

my pleasure su!!!
The best aspect of your poem is the way you express yourself with no inhibitions, very relaxed & natural sounding. This doesn't sound like flowery verse, but rather like down-to-earth conversation. Any mother would love to have such a tribute written especially for her. Great job in drawing a word picture with lots of details.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

A writer must have his own voice and it should be natural to readers, That's what I believe in...read more
You rocked with the last three lines.....
Its truly a great and meaningful work......
Happy Mother's Day.:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Happy mother's day......Thank you so much Naat.. :)
Zephyr

6 Years Ago

My pleasure......
Awe, so graceful and beautiful Surya...
Mothers are really important people in the world, as they are the reasons of why we're alive in this world...
Amazing poem Surya!
Keep it up!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Yeah they are....and yes I agree....
Thank you so much Shaaan...:)

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