Ek Ishaara...

Still Finding .........

Beparwaah hai ye Ishq, Pyaar ka saza dilata hai,

Pagal sa mann hai kehta phir se Ishq me doob jaaoo,

Dil se do baate kya karli tumhari aankhen,

Kehte hai mujhse, rukh ja shayar ab toh pyaar hogaya inse

Hume pyaar joh hua karta tha tumhare aane par,

Utna hi dard hua  tera jaane me...

Jaane mann, Ishq kya kiya tumse

nazraana milgaya muje Udaasi mann ka

Phir bi kya kare, Mann toh kehta

Ek ishaara to kardo bus humari jaan 

       Aapki naam hai...

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

Wow beautiful lines. The feeling in those lines are remarkable. Its true love always gives us pain and sorrows but it is what has held us together on this planet and without it everything will be nothing.
A very good poem. Just keep writing and writing everything that your heart says. Very soon you will be one of those best writers of our country.

[Surya]

You just said it...Thankkkkuuuuu ssooooo much Manasa ji.....Yep I will...and thanks alot..:)

[Manasa.L]

my pleasure .....)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good use of words Surya, you write well as usual but in hindi you are more better than you know

[Surya]

Haha...Thanks a lot Farhan for your kind words....:)

[Mr.Writer]

Such sweet and lovely words of yours Surya!
Just point at me and I'll give you all the love, also how love is such a thing that all us love it! :D
I loved it Surya :)
Keep it up

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you so much Shaan, am glad for them...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

would like to see a translated version, also.

[Surya]

Sure only for you J,..

How cruel love is as it awards you with grief,
But this heart is a fool asks me to swim in the feel of love again...

My heart said, Oh! Writer do stop here as I lend me to those beautiful eyes after a chat with them...

That feel of love I used to get when ever You stand by me
Equals the amount of sadness after your depart...

Oh my love!!...The way I loved is anything,
But You awarded me with tears of death..

But still this foolish hearts cries for just a sigh of your's so that I could again gift you this life.....

Though it isn't beautiful after translation but it makes sense....Thank you J for your kind visit...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the theme...thanks for translating...

[Zephyr]

Another good work, Surya:)
I am not so good in Hindi but enjoy your poems.
Simple & Sweet!

[Surya]

That's so sweet of you....Thank you so much Naat...:)

[Zephyr]

My pleasure:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautiful su.....i love this!

[Surya]

Thank you so much Dear....:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure my junglee deer...

[Abhishek Asthana]

Now your hindi-urdu writings are on its way...Just few errors " pyaar ka saza dilata h for pyaar ki saza dilata h... dil se do baatein kya karli tumhari aankhein for dil se do baatein kya karli tumhari aankhon ne... nazrana mil gya mujhe udaasi mann ka for man ki udaasi ka... jaan aapki naam h for jaan aapke naam h... rest is fabulous... I really love udru language...

[Surya]

Now a days I started loving it too....Well thank you Abhishek for your kind visit and words, I will check them again and surely correct it...:)

[pia]

Ahhh i love reading stuff here written in urdu /hindi
Im not very good at it (i know its my mother tongue but i guess thats what happens when your country gets colonised lol)
But it really brings me joy to read this

[Surya]

S**t happens sometimes, hahaha, No issues, You soon get good at them....Thank you for your kind visit..:)

[Priyanshi]

as awesome as your other poems, Surya...itni khubsurat hoti hai aapki poem,... waah kya kehna?..best writer se aise poems ki hi umid hai.

[Surya]

Aap nahi toh hum kaha...Thank you so much Priyanshi, for your every single word....It means a lot to me, Thank you...:)

[Priyanshi]

Its my pleasure, Surya. aap jitne ache ho , apne dum pe ho.