Kahaani...

Maat naa aayi is jung ka

Lad raha hu mein is aatish ishq ki mulk mein..

kya yeh zaroori hai ladai,

kya yeh bus nahi mere dil ki baatein..

maut bi haazir hai is jung mein

mein bi dekhu haare koun dil ya jisam..

agar haar bi gaye ulaad mere pade kitaabon se

ki itihaas mein unki dada the joh pyaar ki jung lada tha...

Aur koyi seekhe ki pyaar haar ya jeet se nahi

Dil se hota hai...museebat se bi ishq hojaata haii

aur ye dil tujhme koh jaata hai...

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

That's not fair! It looks and sounds such a beautiful poem, but being a mere English speaker, I can't understand it. I would love it if you would translate (Even though it might lose a bit of its power in the translation!)

[Najam Us Saher]

Incredible....I really liked it..

[Surya]

Am glad you liked it...Thank you Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Sofia]

Wonderfully penned! Thnx for sharing...it was truly amazing..i liked it..keep writing!

[Surya]

Thank you So much Sofia...:)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

after reading this...i felt a tinge of pain...and this is such a meaningful write...i felt my feelings written in here...i can't probably write anything these days and i felt my words which i wanna utter are here....thank you su for sharing it...keep it up.

[Surya]

Try writing you will definitely do wonders...Thank you wajiha....Hope u get well soon...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks su....hope so.

[Zephyr]

I loved the last stanza.
Always a pleasure to read your works:)
Keep it up Surya!!

[Surya]

That's an honour...Thank you so much Neetha..:)

[Zephyr]

My pleasure

[Priyanshi]

Sahi baatein likhi hai is poem mein aapne......apki har poem ki tarah yeh poem bhi bahut khubsoorat hai.....yuhi likhte raho, writer.
I love reading your work....and this was also great, Surya.

[Surya]

Haha, thanks a lot Priyanshi....:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.