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Miss you Buddy...

Miss you Buddy...

A Poem by Surya
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Memories...

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We born in different states
Grew up somewhere indistinct states
These books bought us together
and that cafe with filter strips made us together..

Those beautiful nights in shady lamps
those bricks with stars and 
hands with rum, a fire in between
with a smoke in air..Oh!! how beautiful, those nights..

We laid together, we fought together,
Those flirty days and nights, where 
we backed those girls, indeed their fingers on us
ohh!! how beautiful they are....in memories now..

A place always for you, 
A glass and a puff everytime for you,
Many a time I will remind you,
A part of this man occupied by you...

A bye cannot take us away,
I wish this Bye now
Will make our bond strong...
A wish of luck from all my heart..
Gonna miss you buddy....


Words in hindi..:

Kise pata tha ki hum mile ek din
kise pata tha ki hum toote is din...

Yaad aate mujhe woh din hooghli pe
aur woh raat talab pe....

Woh raat mein humaari yaadein
uss kursi pe humari hasi...

Woh diwaaron ke beech mein apna talaash zindagi ka
khair mujhe nahi pata tha ki hum roote is din...

dekta hu kitna door jaayega mujhe chodke
kabi aanaa hi padega woh yaadon se

intezaar hai us din ka jab hum chatth pe baite
aur woh kahaani phir se yaad aaye..jaha
tu suit pehnke ho aur mera kitaab haath mein...

kehna toh padega jaffi dalke ki 
dost chal raha hai mera kuch paane...

aur mein intezaar kare apni wapasi ka wohi chatth pe...

© 2017 Surya



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This is a very relatable message. I like the way you include details from time spent together to show us how you'll miss this person. Even tho it's written for a friend, it could also apply to many other kinds of "good-byes" in life, whether a pet or a family member, etc. I like the way you are subtle with your details ("a glass & a puff") which gives readers room to interpret in different ways. I also admire that you can write in more than one language! Very impressive! (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Months Ago


this one is really heart touching,, and the line our hands on rum it is so true brother

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Haha, it is.....Thank you dear friend for your kind visit and words...:)
Prashant Bajpai

8 Months Ago

we be glad to read more from you. such are so influencing
Surya

8 Months Ago

Haha,..I will try my best to it....Thanks again...:)
we all have people we really miss ,we make friends and we lose them some how,but we can stay in touch

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Yep,...Thank you Wordman...:)
This is such a wonderful poem. it has reminded me of my friends that I miss dearly. I look forward to your next work!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

I miss him tooo....Thank you so much Lily for your kind visit ...:)
A sweet, cute and beautiful poem on you and your buddy together...
The emotions mix from happy, to sad, to humor, and that really enhanced the poem!
Keep it up

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Thank you Shaan...:)
Mr.Writer

8 Months Ago

No problem :)
Kind and needed words. I liked the use of the two languages. Words keep friendship and memory alive. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Yeah they do..Thank you John..:)
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
I liked the English version better than the Hindi one. I feel you can tinker up a bit with the Hindi phrases here.. Nevertheless, a good theme, well penned :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Yeah, I agree still learning to improve my linguistics in hindi...Thank you Yumna for your kind visi.. read more
Dr YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

You're welcome, Surya. A pleasure always :)
you wrote in twice and then too in different languages... so undoubtedly you deserve double appreciation for that... your best friend might be feeling vert lucky after going through this one...
great work surya

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much Abhishek...:)
Having a smoke and drink while laughing the night away with a close friend. Times that won't be forgotten. A lighthearted trip into our past. A fun read Surya. Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Thank you Duff for your kind visit and words...:)
duff

8 Months Ago

Anytime Surya!
I really liked that you wrote a poem in English and Hindi, both! Both are beautiful, I liked them. Keep it up!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Surya

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much Anjali...:)
Anjali

8 Months Ago

You're welcome!

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