Game Of Soul....

Game Of Soul....

A Poem by Surya

Unfavourable game with twists and turns
Loss and lost...studious soul without feathers
Game of desires took control, it's a 
Fairy tale of a destroyed soul...

Searched in loss, Travelled a lot
Met many who turned me a lot
Running till I lost in lot
Made a story of wanderlast soul from a lot..

Fortitude of life taught me a lot
Where greenery made my way
On trembling hills in magma of rain
Fighting till I reached a top

Tapped my feet and danced a lot
Cried and laughed, In the savage dark
I seen my soul which stayed alone.
Nothing is worth just ups and downs.

Am proud to announce, I learnt a lot....

© 2017 Surya



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Sweet and dramatic. I like it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

Thank you So much Dear writer...:)
didn`t we all learn a lot

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

I can't promise about all, haha,...Thank you Wordman...:)
By far my favorite piece of yours! You have some killer lines in here.
"On trembling hills in magma of rain"
Sick imagery.
"Loss and lost...studious soul without feathers"
Good stuff for sure.
Great work.


Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

Ohh....Thank you for your kind visit and words...:)
duff

11 Months Ago

You're welcome my friend:)
Good use of words and a very good message ..keep it up surya..

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

Thank you Farhan...:)
I agree Surya;)
Life teaches a lot.
Great choice of words. Wonderfully penned:)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much Neetha..:)
"Am proud to announce, I learnt a lot...."
We learn from our mistakes and events that happen in our lives... very true!
You've provided beautiful imagery of the soul as well and overall, it was amazing!
Keep it up

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much Shaan..:)
Mr.Writer

11 Months Ago

No problem
i like that the speaker lived kind of a hectic, jump in with both feet and without thinking kind of life, but at least learned from it...and can probably calm down and slow down---and enjoy the wisdom gained from the journey...i've lived much this way so can relate.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

Oh...am glad to know that u could relate to it....Thank you J.
Honest and wise words shared dear Surya.
"Fortitude of life taught me a lot
Where greenery made my way
On trembling hills in magma of rain
Fighting till I reached a top"
I liked and understood the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much John...:)
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Woahh!! This was truly amazing nd I loved it.. Excellent work...I liked the way u used a lot of lots in the second para...anyways it was very good 😊

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

Thank you So.much Sofia...am glad you liked it...:)
Sofia

11 Months Ago

My pleasure 😃
the last line....am proud to announce,i learnt alot...i loved this line of your poem surya!...the whole poem is an amazing view of ups and downs in life and yes, these ups and downs have made you learn alot which is expressed in the last line.!!....perfectly perfect...keep writing!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Surya

11 Months Ago

I will dear...Thank you so much Sweetness...:)
Wajiha Nayeem

11 Months Ago

always a pleasure surya!

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Surya

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