Game Of Soul....

Game Of Soul....

A Poem by Surya

Unfavourable game with twists and turns
Loss and lost...studious soul without feathers
Game of desires took control, it's a 
Fairy tale of a destroyed soul...

Searched in loss, Travelled a lot
Met many who turned me a lot
Running till I lost in lot
Made a story of wanderlast soul from a lot..

Fortitude of life taught me a lot
Where greenery made my way
On trembling hills in magma of rain
Fighting till I reached a top

Tapped my feet and danced a lot
Cried and laughed, In the savage dark
I seen my soul which stayed alone.
Nothing is worth just ups and downs.

Am proud to announce, I learnt a lot....

© 2017 Surya



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This poem is different from the rest of your other poems and I really loved it. You really, very well ,penned the ups and downs of life....am happy reading this poem...Thank you for sharing so wonderful poem, Surya.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you for such a wonderful review...Thank you So.much Priyanshi...:)
Priyanshi

1 Year Ago

My pleasure.
My favorite line, "it's a fairytale of a destroyed soul" .
Over all, I loved the poem.😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you So much Anjali...:)
Anjali

1 Year Ago

You're welcome!
Wow......I loved the rhythm of this poem...It is so encouraging....This one is my most favourite ones from your work till now....Thank you for a good read...This poem speaks volumes...I loved the last line the most. It makes the readers feel sad for the ups and downs in the beginning but in the end they are happy along with you :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Yeah it seems so....Thank you Saher..:)
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're welcome.

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