Jaane kaha inhe..

After a Long break

Na jaane ye kyaa barsaat hai boondon ki.. aankhon se

Dil ko takra diya kahi, koyi aur dil ne..

Bheeg gaye hum isi barsaat mein...

Mein kada hu isi barsaat mein aur ro raha hu

Par deke nahi koyi....Dikhe bi kaha

Mein tadap raha hu isi baarish mein

Par pehchaane koun mujhe...

Sawal karta hu is duniya se aakhir ye hai kyun

Dil ka sawaal ka jawab toh dil se hi milega

Par mujhe laga nahi aise dil kisi aur ke paas hai...

Mujhe laga nahi mein insaan hu aaj

in insaano ko beech mein...

Dil toh dhoor ki baat hai

Par dimaag bi gayab hai....

Hasi aaa raha hai mujhe ye insaano pe

jinke saath mein aaj tak hu

par mein samajh na saka ki 

 bigde hai ye log jinse mein jaanta tha...

Jinse dil se baat hota tha, kabi kabi hasi bi

Par aaj me nafrat karta hu in insaan se joh

Dimaag ki khel mein dil ko koh chuka hai

Jinhe mein jaanta nahi...

Reviews

[Pravir]

I loved the deeep meaning you conveyed . . suryaji apne har bar ki trah fir se apni batoon se sama bandh diya h . . love ur writes

[pragya gaur]

Deep one and emotional ....Touched my heart

[Surya]

Ohhoo..even amtouched with ur words..Thnk you so much Pragya for your kind visit and words..:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Deep one and good use of words..amazing poetry

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan for your kind visit and words..:)

[heartspeaks]

Well done. Keep writing.. Lot of improvement... Keep it up. Deep message conveyed. Just keep going.. Looking forward for more

[Surya]

Sure I will...Thank you so much for your kind words and visit....:)

[Sofia]

This is wonderful...and nice too...keep writing...I liked it :)

[Surya]

Thank you so much Sofia...:)

[Sofia]

Most welcome ☺

[Riddhi]

I really liked the theme of this poem because actually also feel the same way many times..Actually today people have forgot emotions , intuitions , they don't listen to what their heart say but to what their brain says...
here are some corrections which i think are neccessary in your poem -
instead of main kada hu it should have been main khada hu
insaano ko beech should have been insaano ke beech
log jinse main jaanta hu should have been jinhe main...
dil se baat hota tha should have been hoti thi.
but inspite of all this errors this poem is actually very nice...I Really liked it
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing
Take care
Riddhi

[Surya]

Welll, thank for your time reading it....
Am not so good at hindi, and I really appreciate your corrections, I need them actually...Thanks for that, I will correct them soon....Thank you riddhi for your kind visit and words...:)

[Riddhi]

Your most welcome.. But i am glad that you wrote poem in our national language...Proud to be an indian

[Surya]

Am extremely proud as an Indian...That's the reason am working more on my national language...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

surya...all i want to say is....after getting wet in the rain...and after feeling each pain....let it just go away!
jaise baarish har cheez ko saaf krdeti hai..usi tarah..apne dil ke hr gham ko niakldo!!...
there is lots and lots of stuff ahead...look for that and put all your energy into it...don;t think of the past and don't let it affect your happy days....i remember u told me that...for little things never become sad...sadness lasts for a few days and everything will be alright!!
so, mr.wonderman....keep doing wonders and be happy and yes, stay blessed..
:) :)

[Surya]

Sure Dear, let it go.......Thanks a lot, no words with me to show my gratitude.....:)

[Prashant Bajpai]

keep writing brother it was good

[Surya]

I will and thank you Prashant for your kind visit and Words...:)

[Prashant Bajpai]

yes i just started publishing here will be glad to reviewed by you need all your help

[Surya]

Sure ...I will...:)

[Priyanshi]

Whoa, It's so deep and intense.Throw those people out of your life and stay happy ....they don't deserve to be in your life....
Always be happy... and keep on writing..... I really loved it, Surya.

[Surya]

I will try that...Thank you So much Priyanshi....:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, friend.

[Najam Us Saher]

So deep and thoughtful....It is really heart touching and you have really improved a lot...keep it up :)

[Surya]

Thank you so much Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.