Silent Plumage..

Silent Plumage..

A Poem by Surya

I found no answer 
I found no life
I found nothing to chase
I found nothing after my questions

It's empty in and out
Rushing drops from 
Draining eyes, smelt 
Aroma in melting ice

Dead and found 
Even I breathe now.
Not to utter but 
No words, nothing in my mind.

Started a journey 
To find a solaced path.
In my hidden destiny
I found lament gaze and 
A silent plumage that can't fly .

© 2017 Surya


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Utter despair and sadness!Such a powerful yet melancholic poem.Great work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Honest words and thoughts led reader to destine places and thoughts.
"Dead and found
Even I breathe now.
Not to utter but
No words, nothing in my mind."
The above lines stood to me. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is a most original way to word-paint the ideas of how a possibly inadequate-feeling person might feel. The title is a work of art in itself, & I loved the imagery thru-out your poem, but I kinda think it would be fun to add more "plumage" imagery to amplify this metaphor. There's nothing worse than a bird that's silent & can't fly. God help those who feel this way . . .

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Oh! Yes, Thank you Margie...:)
lovelyyy.......beautiful and wonderfully written....keep going.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thnk you so much lovely....Am glad for your visit....:)
I kind of find it relatable a little bit, as it was hard for me to find a place for me to fit in, a thing that I could go after, and a purpose to achieve. It's beautiful. I liked it! Keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Deep down you know something, just listen to it might be you feel happy...Thank you Anjali for your .. read more
Anjali

6 Years Ago

Yes I've found it! You are very welcome!
As always , this one is also a too beautiful poem... You are a great writer, friend.
Keep on writing.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Priyanshi...am soo glad for your words...Thank you...:)
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

My pleasure, friend.
The words are just like feelings pouring, describes raw emptiness a person without purpose feels.
It's smartly structured to make right impact at the end! Good job✌️😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Sometimes, yes....Thank you kruthika for your kind visit and sharing your words,,,,am glad for them... read more
looking for something tangible,something to believe in

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

There is always something to believe in...:)
good piece describing the speaker searching for a reason for being...something to strive for...a goal that he hasn't found yet...i really like this...do think you meant "Even I breathe now>"



Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Yeah it's breathe, I will change it now...Thank you J.
Very good use of words Surya...short and nice poem..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya

6 Years Ago

Thank you Farhan...:)

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