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Sheep And Shepherd...

Sheep And Shepherd...

A Poem by Surya

Tickling clock turns around
Taunting shepherd goes around
A flock of sheep in herding sound
Feels like a morning mourn 
After a tickling clock..

Bumpy land with ups and downs
Sheeps like goats goading in,
Flock of birds on their backs
Making the shepherd to fizz around

Greeny grass as their lunch
Blue waves at their necks
Gentle wind on their wool
Rising horizon at their eyes

Lazy shepherd back to home
Bagging the moon and stars 
On the way back and imprisoned
The flock in a fold
Making the melodious sound 
A horny blaze....


© 2017 Surya



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Nice use of words. You made me visions sheep and shepherd. I liked the place and location. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


There might be a million poems already written about shepherds, but your approach is always stunningly fresh & imaginative! I love your imagery, which is simple, yet surprising in its clarity. I thought maybe you meant "TICKING" clock (instead of "tickling"), but then you used this word again, so I guess it's intentional. It's thought-provoking how a clock can be tickling, but this is just what I mean by your startling observations of everyday life ideas.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Haha, Thank you Margie....:)
This was a fun read Surya, thanks for sharing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Haha,Thank you Sir...:)
About sheep, I could imagine every line very well...
You wrote it really, very wonderfully.
Great job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Priyanshi....hahaha..., am glad you you did liked it...:)
Priyanshi

1 Year Ago

My pleasure.
As the other works I enjoyed this one too... awEsome surya ji

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you Pragya...:)
you painted some vivid images,almost thought i was herding sheep

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Haha, Thank you Wordman for this kind review...:)
I really enjoyed reading this Surya, as it made me feel I was on a fun and humorous adventure with mixes of emotions around me!
Well done, keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Haha, Thank you Shaan...:)
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

No problem Surya! :D
Unique and refreshing read. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you Saher...:)
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're welcome. ☺
nice imagination. Add one picture to this will be more better.

like this- https://us.123rf.com/450wm/keithlevit/keithlevit1212/keithlevit121201110/17227932-herd-of-sheep-grazing-in-the-field-sacred-valley-cusco-region-peru.jpg?ver=6



Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Sure, I will try...Thank you..:)
Nice creativity used up there, I liked it! A good piece!😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you Anjali..:)
Anjali

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome!

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