Sailor...

Sailor...

A Poem by Surya

A sailor am on those
blushy waters
A sailor am on the
hopes of heaven

Mighty soldier on lustrous waters
Hugging those wavy dolphins 
Waving a bye to the golden stars
Dreaming light on the woody mars.

Sorted and spotted a raging shark
On my spine it clinged a spark
Not a hunter in this fiery dark
Managed to slide at my mark.

A dewy morning off my wheel
Anchored the ship on an isle
Had some rum and some crum
And some creepy lizards on my drum.

Waving to surise
Hugging the nights
On these waters
Having fights.

This is my life on these waters
touching the whales and scorching tales, 
P***y Octopus on my page 
while thunders blowing in rage.

A sailor am on these
Blushy waters
A sailor am rejoicing
The life of heaven

© 2017 Surya



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very very nicely written and thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Liked your creativity and imagination. It's quite a adventurous read, I think, cuz it's about being a sailor and all the pros and cons of it. I loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Great work.... Loved this piece... Thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


U r in lv with d Sea... Grt...m loving it

Posted 1 Year Ago


I liked the flow of thoughts and the feel of the sea. The sea can bring joy to the people who love her. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


You painted a sailor who is totally in love with everything about the sea.. Wish you a smooth sail..
Thank you for sharing this nice craft..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind visit Bala...:)
A sailor am on these blushy waters...wow.
great work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Ohhh...Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)
Priyanshi

1 Year Ago

My pleasure
brilliant work my friend. keep writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear friend...:)
a sailors life on the shore or on the sea,never a dull moment for a sailor like me

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

It' son both...Thank you wordman...:)
This is really great Surya:)
Loved the the way you penned the whole thing.
The choice of words is great.
And the poem holds many meanings.
This is by far, for me, your greatest work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Surya

1 Year Ago

Hope it does hold, haha...Thank so much Neetha...:)
Neetha

1 Year Ago

Pleasure......:)

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