Yaad aata hai mujhe

Udne ki koshish jab karta hu

Ghirneki darr yaad aata hai mujhe

Kushi jab bi me hota hu

Ghum ke din yaad aata hai mujhe

Baite kab bi me rehta hu

Guzre din yaad aata hai mujhe

Pyaar jabibi me baat tha hi

Tu yaad aata hai mujhe

Kafa ki koshish me me rehta hu par

Teri Vafa mehsoos hota hai mujhe

Yaadon me bi tu Yaad aata hai mujhe

Aakhir tu yaad kyu aata hai mujhe

Teri Zulfon me chupi meri sapne

Teri dil me dadkti meri dadkan

Teri chupi chupi voh hasi

Teri naino me mera naksha

Kyu yaad aata hai mujhe

Aakhir tu yaad kyu aata hai mujhe

Par kehna toh padega ki

Tu yaad aata hai mujhe

Tu yaad aata hai mujhe

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Aakhir tu yaad kyu aati hai mujhe,
Tu yaad ati hai mujhe.
Make this changes.
You know what I understand how hard it is to write in language when that is not your mother tongue. I am a urdu speaking girl but still I don't know basic urdu words. This poem has so much meaning in them using simple words you weaved a beautiful poem. Just loved it honestly.
Man mein dar hamesha rehta hai kyunki udas rehni ki adat jo ho jati hai.

[Priyanshi]

wow...
waah kya likha hai
"Teri Zulfon me chupi meri sapne
Teri dil me dadkti meri dadkan
Teri chupi chupi voh hasi
Teri naino me mera naksha
Kyu yaad aata hai mujhe...."
ye waali lines, wow, kitni gazab ki likhi hai...