Faazil...

Alaalat hai ye shikvat-e-gham pe

Tere alawaah sab jee lete hai

Faazil kehte hai woh mujhe par 

teri aks ki rukam roz hota hai

Me toh chale jaata hu is rango se

Kya hai ye shama is mai me bi tu hota hai

Rangreza ki alfaaz toh zakm hai par

uns ki udaan ke sapno me bi tu hota hai

Kya karu me jab daraaz-o-andera ek tha ab toh 

tere bina sawera mein bi kuch khaas nahi hota hai

Reviews

[Priyanshi]

Ending ki lines bahut khub hai...
.aur faazil title acha laga
Keep on writing:)

[Surya]

Haha...thank you...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very nice use of words 😄

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan...:)