Tangled Soul...

I feel we are still alive

In an ether world neither your's nor mine

It's so miraculous like a ray

Of my hope

It's an immortal elixir in your eyes

Which I got through your lips,

I feel life in our bond

for which I have no words

Just stay calm and look into my eyes

For I see a world of mine in your's

Let me tangle us and free our souls

For they fly to where love has no words

Reviews

[horizon]

The words of commitment,loyalty,longing and love knitting 2 souls into one beautiful relationship..these are really sweet words..👍

[Surya]

Thank you, Horizon...:)

[Anshuman Aryav]

Amazing...From the beginning to the end I enjoyed this piece..
love it..
Keep writing..
Keep sharing..

[Surya]

Thank you Anshuman...:)

[Anshuman Aryav]

You are welcome 😄

[Anjali]

Wow... It has so much beauty in it.. I loved reading it.

[Surya]

Thank you, Anjali...:)

[Anjali]

Mention not

[sansrity sinha]

beautiful one! I really liked it...

[Surya]

Thank you, Sansrity...:)

[Ms Paragon]

True love frees us. Beautiful thought, beautiful poem, well written! Nice work!

[Surya]

perhaps yes..Thank you, Paragon..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Lovely words, They are simply heart touching.

[Surya]

Thank you, Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Liked it from the Start, beautifully written

[Surya]

Thank you, Farhan...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words dear friend. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[barleygirl]

To me, this is the ultimate description of a loving connection. It's not about expecting material aspects of the relationship, but in lifting each other up, no matter the circumstances at hand. This is the kind of love we all have to give, not related to politics, religion, money, etc. This is the divine freedom of untangled love intentions. I love the way you describe it in completely creative terms. Always love to see you here again. I'm glad you read-request me so I don't miss your rare visits! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Surya]

I'm grateful for you!! And sorry for rare visits...
Thank you Margie(((hugs)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

poetry is in the eyes, the heart, in actions...we do write words but what do they really mean?
and is it simply the meanings that are eternal...not the words themselves?
perhaps...maybe the best poems are the unwritten ones.

j.

[Surya]

Perhaps yes, Thank you, J.