The fence is left to morning glories, The heft of their heaping vines - Tendrils and leaves, Flowers and seeds - Each not the weight of a feather But together they sag The rusting chicken wire On the four nails Holding it to birch posts.
The fence is left to morning glories, The morning is left to write itself, And the glory is left to God.
I saw some metaphor in this. The morning glories might be light and insignificant by themselves, but together they are powerful and beautiful enough to pull on the fence and be written into history in the form of poetry. We are strong, and able to make changes if we work together toward a similar goal. Gorgeous.
This poem has a lot of potential. It has a sense of deja vu I can't quite put my finger on ... I would say look at the stanzas, it seems a little choppy in spots.
Just a simple woman who loves poetry. A single Mom, a widow, with four children. My kids are all in
their late teens-early twenties, with only two still at home! empty nest is not far off! Hooray. :-.. more..